Good!
I like this piece. The solos are very nice. My only advice is to ease up on the strings in quieter parts of the solos.
There's no need to pluck the strings that hard in a melody such as this, where the feel is very mellow and peaceful. The accents don't have to tower over every other note, all you need to do is make sure they're just a bit louder than the others.
Other than that, a wonderful composition. Well done!
Yeah i let myself go on that one, thanks for the tips!
Perfect!
I couldn't find a single mistake in this piece! The very first thing that I pictured in my mind from hearing this song was the sun, slowly going down to bring the day to an end, and sleep until tomorrow. Just the right amount of complexity, and the low intensity is a perfect fit into the theme of the sun going down. A flawless composition. Well done!
Thanks for your very positive words! I'm glad my song tells the correct story! Thanks for reviewing!!
Cheerio!
Good!
Love the audio clarity! The dynamics are at just the right tone as well. Although in my opinion, the strum pattern and rhythm doesn't quite fit in with the original. Its a bit more intense than the original, which has a very surreal and floating feeling to it. Your version feels like more of a toe-tapper. But then again, who ever said it was a bad idea to change it up a bit? Well done!
thanks Oso09. it is faster. it wasn't deliberate though, it must of just ended up that way. i'm glad you liked it :)
Love it.
The chords are kinda basic, but man, with lyrics like that you don't need a progression. Nice work.
Thanks man :D
I tend to compose my lyrics around real life situations that I or my close friends/family have to deal with. I find it so much easier to write about something when you can fully understand it.
Comments like this make everything worth it for me :)
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